Hmmm....
I thought it was ok... the jokes weren't really funny and the animation wasn't amazing (but it was good) You can tell that you've put alot of effort into it, but maybe you where trying too hard? I'm not a funny guy myself but I think "StandYourGround" was talking about comedic timing as aposed to sound syncing. I liked it though, better than half the crap that gets pumped through here daily.